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Making Love with you
posted on Apr 19 at 5:21 pm | 12 comments
Making Love With You

The moon is high in the sky and shines down on us in bed you and I
Time seems to stand still with every kiss.
Sweat streams from your body as we move in sync
Nothing else seems to matter but the beat of your heart next to mine.
Your hands caress my body knowing every inch of me
Me pleasing you in ways that make you never want to leave.
Hearing you call my name as I moan with the sweetness of every twist and turn.
My body trembles with every touch.
Love fills the room and over takes the sound of music as we grow as one ,
Passions explode with every passing hour.
Intimacy felt so good and made me feel proud to be a woman
Your woman in your arms.
Loving you made me feel so happy that you were my man with your head upon my breast as we breath each other in deep.
Free my mind, body and soul is the mission you take on when you are stroking me delivering pleasure to my zone
Earth quaking love making …. Hours of undeniable ecstasy.
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THE3RDSTREETBUTCHER said:
posted on Apr 19 at 5:49 pm
"CUT!" get this man a towel and a cold drink!:-) Very erotic and very easy to visualize. Is this new or does this poem represent a certain "TIME" or "PERSON?" I love picking the mind of a poet.:-)
Kathym14 said:
posted on Apr 19 at 5:55 pm
I don't mind answering questions about my work. I get inspired by a lot of things. Since me and my longtime love just ended out on again off again relationship i was reminded of one of our nights together and this is how he made me feel. He was so into himself as I look back that he didn't realize what all he had.
THE3RDSTREETBUTCHER said:
posted on Apr 19 at 6:14 pm
Many of us don't realize what we have until it's gone. Then we find ourselves chasing after a moment in time. A moment we shared with one and hope to find that same "feeling" with another. Keep writing and allow yourself to heal. Yet your writing seems to be leading you back to a person that doesn't deserve you. Is it a "physical" thing, or is it "spiritual?" Did he make you a better, happier human-being? Damn I am getting nosey....sorry.
Kathym14 said:
posted on Apr 19 at 6:19 pm
No my writing is actually helping me heal. He will never have a chance with me again no even sexually. I need more than that. I need someone that will Get me. Just like you said about your music.... I feel that way about my poetry and myself. i want someone to understand and to get me to feel me on all levels not just physical. and no you are nosey. I don't mind sharing. But I do have a limit on that.lol I am happier because of me not because of a man . My poetry excites me and turns me on. it is almost orgasmic to me when I get a really go response from people who get my work and don't over think it or add a different meaning to it that is not there.
THE3RDSTREETBUTCHER said:
posted on Apr 19 at 6:53 pm
Now that's what it's all about! People getting and understanding your message. I definately understand and get you. I hope to GOD it's notbecause you are a Cancer!:-)
Kathym14 said:
posted on Apr 19 at 6:56 pm
lol now that is funny. I would like to think that great minds think alike or it is a creative thing and you get it or simply you are an intelligent man and you just have good taste.
Kathym14 said:
posted on Apr 19 at 7:19 pm
hey check out the new blogs
THE3RDSTREETBUTCHER said:
posted on Apr 19 at 7:50 pm
I'd like to choose ALL OF THE ABOVE:-) Out of curiosity, how long were you two together? My older brother is a Taurus nad he is VERY stubborn and opinionated. As a matter of fact...I couldn't stand my older brother when we were kids:-).
Kathym14 said:
posted on Apr 19 at 7:52 pm
lol I was with this man for 6 yrs
It was nice at first then it got reallycrazy his way or no way. He asked me to marry him I said yes and then he backed out of it he used it like a weapon we argued all the time It was wild
Kathym14 said:
posted on Apr 19 at 7:53 pm
If you think this poem is exciting you should check out my poem Music of love. That wasn't about anyone either I just wrote it.
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